Creative Writing :D

So this is my first poem for my creative writing class and I want to know what you guys think of it! Feel free to be harsh, haha. Also it needs a title. Yeah.

to dream it to touch the untouchable,
your fingers can caress freedom like a small child.
you can cling to wisdom and youth
without them being wiped away by the savage storm that is awake.
you find yourself in a world where hunger and war doesn't exist,
for they are a distant idea like reality.
to dream,
or to be awake,
is nothing but the foolishness you find yourself in.

<3.