Nanowrimo

Alright, so November is National Novel Writing Month, I try to do this every November. Pretty much the goal is to write a novel (50,000 words) in November. Anywho, it's only day what 5? And I'm stuck. So I'm going to post what I have so far and than I want any and all feed back from you. Tell me what you think, plot ideas, anything. :)

Having grown up in a small Christian Georgia town, Duncan was used to disapproving looks. Whether if was from his father when he told him he would be playing the lead role in the school musical. Or from his peers that were around when he turned the head cheerleader, Judy Carmichael down when she asked him to Prom. So the glares that he was receiving from the two red haired ladies walking pass the theater as he kissed his boyfriend Chase had no affect on him what so ever. He watched as Chase disappeared behind the theater doors before shoving his hands into his pockets and heading down 7th Avenue. Duncan had met Chase right after he had moved into the city; he was sitting in the waiting room at a casting office when Chase walked in. Instantly he was drawn to him; startled by his brilliant green eyes and wind swept blonde hair. Duncan, who had only been in New York for two weeks was taken somewhat aback when Chase walked over and sat down next to him. One glance at each other and the conversation flowed effortlessly, that was until Chase was called into the directors office. He later would find out that Chase had received the part he too was auditioning for. Usually he would have been bothered by this news but a week later Chase asked him on a date and the rest was history. The part that he wanted was gone but he had a new opportunity in a new city with the most gorgeous boy he had ever seen.
Back in his small East Village apartment Duncan threw his coat on the floor and made his way to the small and very outdated kitchen; his two cats, Nodsey and Tubbs rubbed against his leg begging for food and attention. Opening his fridge he placed a bowl of day old tuna on the floor to keeps the cats busy as he began to dig for something that looked some what edible for himself. To his surprised he found a block of cheese that was only a week and a half passed the expiration date to him finding something this fresh was a treat. With the cheese in hand he moved to the pantry and removed the few pieces of bread covered in mold until he found two pieces the were untainted. He quickly made a grilled cheese and was surprised at how un burnt it was considering he didn’t have any butter to put in the pan.



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